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Returning
January 2011
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09/2006 – 02/2008 other part time jobs for independent financing of my studies
listed under “Work Experience”
“drug dealer” immediately comes to mind.
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Sometimes less is better
Including your date and location of birth isn’t quite the “personal touch” that is often advised to include in your resume.
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If you use your iPhone
To reply to an email from a potential employer, please do not treat it like a text message, and please do not sign your email with “Sent from my iPhone”.
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I have always been numbers oriented and feel as though I would be a good fit for this position for several reasons. I am very thorough and pay attention to detail. Above all I am organized. I work hard and I am results driven.
opening of a Cover Letter
I beg to differ with the 3rd sentence.
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The fact that I am pursuing an advanced degree shows that I am a quick and able learner who thinks outside of the box, finding solutions to unusual problems., and I not only adapt to new situations, I thrive in them.
part of Cover Letter
Please note the punctuation and the fallacy.
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Diploma:
Junior Achievementlisted under “Education” -
Personal hygiene and grooming, bed making, cooking, vital signs, range of motion
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• 30 hours famine for hunger every year since 5th grade ( spring 2004 – spring 2009)
listed under “Qualifications”
Please prioritize.
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Viral and word of mouth marketing for various parties
listed under “Skills”
There has got to be a better way of saying this.
Choice snippits from cover letters & resumes
